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Martyr:It's Never Too Late
You don't have to believe me, but I know
All the different kinds of pain, and processes of sorrow
What it feels like not wanting to wake up to see another tomorrow
I had every attempt planned out
I slammed the tear-stained pen down
I screamed in my head it's either never or now
And I slowly walked out onto the road
Trying to not turn back, because there's no more hope
I left it behind mixed on the paper, the last goodbye letter that I wrote
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Give me your hate / Hand me your pain
Toss me your blame / Force out your bane
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I've broken all of my blood oaths
Stacked on top of all the unread notes
The words written down always dragged me into the undertow
I secretly despised my own existence, I'm nothing but a coward
Every second I spent alone I always backed myself into another corner
I want to leave nothing to be remembered by, I don't want my death to matter
All I can say is don't make the same mistakes I have, don't die on the inside
Because once it's done, there is no going back to your same old life
You don't want any part of it, you don't know what this is like
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Give me your problems / Hand me your burdens
I will serve your sentence / I will accept your judgments
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I have too many knives in my back, and each one goes deeper
I always had my trust, and my heart broken over and over
So I guess my memories and I will always be together
I remember those long, never ending nights staying awake
I recall all of those blinding days pretending to be sane
I continue to try and endure it all in this unstable state
I'm so sick of this life, because I know that I will never change
You don't have an idea of how much more agony that I am able to take
So please, just give me all of your suffering, and seal away my deserving fate
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Shower me with your tears / I know what you're going through
There's nothing more to fear / It's too late for me, but it's never too late for YOU!
You don't have to believe me, but I know
All the different kinds of pain, and processes of sorrow
What it feels like not wanting to wake up to see another tomorrow
I had every attempt planned out
I slammed the tear-stained pen down
I screamed in my head it's either never or now
And I slowly walked out onto the road
Trying to not turn back, because there's no more hope
I left it behind mixed on the paper, the last goodbye letter that I wrote
-
Give me your hate / Hand me your pain
Toss me your blame / Force out your bane
-
I've broken all of my blood oaths
Stacked on top of all the unread notes
The words written down always dragged me into the undertow
I secretly despised my own existence, I'm nothing but a coward
Every second I spent alone I always backed myself into another corner
I want to leave nothing to be remembered by, I don't want my death to matter
All I can say is don't make the same mistakes I have, don't die on the inside
Because once it's done, there is no going back to your same old life
You don't want any part of it, you don't know what this is like
-
Give me your problems / Hand me your burdens
I will serve your sentence / I will accept your judgments
-
I have too many knives in my back, and each one goes deeper
I always had my trust, and my heart broken over and over
So I guess my memories and I will always be together
I remember those long, never ending nights staying awake
I recall all of those blinding days pretending to be sane
I continue to try and endure it all in this unstable state
I'm so sick of this life, because I know that I will never change
You don't have an idea of how much more agony that I am able to take
So please, just give me all of your suffering, and seal away my deserving fate
-
Shower me with your tears / I know what you're going through
There's nothing more to fear / It's too late for me, but it's never too late for YOU!
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Unsolid
Unsolid
Even when I'm at my weakest
I still lend you my strength
Even when my eyes are their darkest
I still look out for you the best way I can
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I'm not the hero of the day
I just know what's right
I'm not some selfless saint
Someone has to bear the light
I don't expect any praise
All my deeds are of the same kind
I need not your thanks
No relief can fill this void in my life
No rest for the wicked / No love for the abandoned
No hope for the innocent / No pain for the departed
I'll give you my all / I'll rise while I fall
I'll answer your call / I'll serve until there's no pulse
I'm not looking for acknowledgme
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A Moment Of Love
A Moment Of Love
This is a perfect chance of weakness to finally tell you that this isn't just a crush
It's not all about lust; I've always wanted to confess to you that I care about you so much
I apologize for being hesitant all of the time; it's just very hard to say you're my one true love
I yearned to say it out loud, but the words couldn't escape my mouth, that's what my fear does
I tried to say it to you in every lucid dream, that's how strong these feelings are
And I found myself waking up to tears of joy, because a true sense of hope is in my heart
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I want to win you over
And I will never give up
Because you make the dark b
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In My Memories
In My Memories
My love for you felt like frost-bitten pins
My heart, body, mind, and soul were numbing
This double-edged conscience~
No hands were lent / No hands to take
Abandonment Abandonment Abandonment
Countless tears to shed / Countless tears to make
Abolishment Abolishment Abolishment
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The thoughts of you are like venomous-needles
After the emotions are injected the end seems less beautiful
Pain is unforgettable~
This unrequited suffering is self-made
No affection No affection No affection
I hoped you were the one but I fell for you too late
Bad medicine Bad medicine Bad medicine
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image is from FMA
____________________________________________
This poem is written for my project which is titled -
"Broken Wings Unbound: I'm Falling Down, I"m Soaring Now"
In volume one: Exiled Existence
____________________________________________
Check out my galleries below if you want to read more.
Watch me if you think that you like my work.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI really loved this overall, the wording was easy to follow but still extremely impacting. it was so heart breaking and hopeful. I liked how it captured a lot of emotion without being over the top. I loved it! One piece of advice I have is to maybe change the third last line, I felt it was lacking... I think it didn't quite leave as powerful an impression as the previous lines. Overall very well done, I loved how it gave amazing insight and I felt I could really connect with it.
keep up the awesome work, this piece was fantastic!