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Timeless

Seconds to minutes

There's nothing to show for my on-going patience
All I seem to cling on to is this futile existence

I'm slowly succumbing to the dreadful silence
Too long have I been dependent on hopeful emotions
Nothing to lose, and nothing to gain, thus everything is pointless
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Hours turn into days

I helplessly idle by as life itself starts to decay away
I throw away the memories of yesterday

Those special moments I held onto; all the effort I gave
I thought it was all for something because it could never have been replaced
Though I only have myself to blame, as I continue to allow everything be disgraced
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Months seem like years

I've parted with all that felt dear
The outcome of this solitude is fierce

I can't help but fill the empty lands with my tears
New oceans shall arise and attempt to drown out the despair
But if it does not succeed then I will remain inside this unknown fear
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Forever lasts an eternity

In this broken state I shall remain here, eternally
Never again shall I experience any form of sympathy

For I deserve anything besides pity
As damaging as it sounds- it's pure reality
And I know for one, I accept whatever comes to me
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I have finally become ageless

My self-hatred is now painless
Because I still have hope in being faithless

No will to live, and no will to die; I'm just too careless
I've given up on the light, and I've also gave up on the darkness
So I'm going to endure this, an era where my suffering remains timeless
This punishment will forever be frozen in my mind
Until the end of time
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debidebdebdeb Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Very, very good. Read my journal for today
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LadyMortimus Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student General Artist
'No will to live, and no will to die, I'm just too careless
I've given up on the light, and I've also gave up on the darkness
So I'm going to endure this, an era where my suffering remains timeless'

That's my favorite part.

Great work. :heart:
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
I came up with the ending before the rest of the poem. So, in a sense, it's also my favorite part too ^.^
<3
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LadyMortimus Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Student General Artist
:D
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Manigran Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great poem!
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)
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Manigran Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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LadyKiriTheFallen Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nicely written. Good concept!
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, I did my best with this concept, so I'm glad you found it to your liking.
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