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Slowly Breaking Apart

I accepted the consequences-
When I opened up my heart
But I knew I never could stand against-
The love that ceased my wars

I let go of the struggles-
That I hopelessly held in my hands
I finally freed the tears that quarreled-
They fell in order for me to continue to stand

Trust can be the worst enemy
Lies can be the strongest ally

Harmony can succumb to tyranny
Twisted truths can prevent a sacrifice

Mistake can never be contained! / Emotions can never be saved!

Compassion always falls for hate! / Destiny always lusts after fate!

A piece of peace is caged! / Watch the bridges burn away!

Have no hope and have no faith! / Have no shame and have no blame!

I'll desecrate the title of “friend”
I'll redefine the meaning of “foe”

A cycle of paranoia with no end
I won't need anyone anymore

I ignored the risks-
Of letting someone in
But I couldn't resist-
Feeling that warm spark within

I took on the weight of the world-
And ended up in the dark
Ripping away my soul has left me crippled-
Now I'm slowly breaking apart
Reverse and amplify the damage!
Contribute to the cycle of hatred!
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This poem is written for my project, titled - "Broken Wings Unbound: I'm Falling Down / I'm Soaring Now"

In volume three: Tragic Truth

I'm Almost There - [link]
Slowly Breaking Apart -
I'm So Far Away From Hope - [link]
Finally Hitting Rock Bottom - Not Yet Written
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SurvivingNights Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you liked it! :D
It was nothing, really.
williamson13 Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it, and totally relatable. :)
SurvivingNights Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked this one. It means a lot. :)
Mayeaux Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Impressive image!
SurvivingNights Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
Mayeaux Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
vallaska Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Wow... That's some lovely structure right there! Excellent use of verse in the begining and end. You really know how to take full advantage of the styles possibilities!
SurvivingNights Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! ^_^ It has taken many years to transition into this kind of style. I have a few poem templates that I utilize in different poems from time to time. I'm relieved there are few to admire its strange look though. :D
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