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Rain Of Fate

The proud flags were torn away
When warfare came

Burning buildings collapsed
Just like the nations which used to stand

We're no longer united
Because we're consumed by fighting


Quarreling over desires / selfishness is earned
Money sets lives on fire / morals are governed

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Humanity conquered this gift of nature
Because we were given this curse of failure
Just our simple touch turns beauty into torture
And we won't stop, until we get more and more

The sins of our fathers
The prayers of our mothers
The tears of our sisters
The blood of our brothers

A man-made cycle of life and death
Believing in religion; and abiding by justice
Living a life of crime, and an unmatched wickedness
Made-up answers to made-up questions is all we will get

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The last living tree burned
Pity among Mother Earth mourned

The dark clouds shed tear drops of forgotten affection
While we only care about our selves, when the planet needs compassion

The dire cries for help needs to be heard
We cannot let the suffering all around us remain ignored


Because fate rains down upon us all / let it pour
And soon human-kind will fall / make it storm
Let it rain
Let it storm
Make it rain
Make it storm
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Fire stock by :icontearran:

This poem is rewritten for my final project which is titled-
"Revelation Days And Resolution Nights"
First part of "The Rain Chronicles" Saga.
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
Although the text is sad and pessimistic, but frankly this is the  life, but our hope in God's great.
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.....I think... :P
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philippv745 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is very emotional. Good job!
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, I'm so happy you enjoyed this one. It's very close to me. :D
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aylee95 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
awesome~! :D Loved it loved it loved it.
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^.^ Thanks, I'm so happy it was received well. That's all I wanted.
<3
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aylee95 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Well, it was well written and well recieved. :) You're welcome
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shine4evr Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So deep and true. :heart:
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've been getting that "true" comment a lot....it's starting to get stuck in my head lol.
But thank you so much, I'm very glad you liked this piece. <3
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