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My Darkest Hour

I've become lost
In my sundered reflection

I've finally crossed
The line of desperation

I sense something sinister
Something that is beyond cruel

My tears seem to hinder
Ready to break down soon

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The darkness is always waiting

To rule / To conquer
To swallow / To devour
To return / To overpower

The shadows are always lurking

As I cry / As I weep
As I beg / As I plead
As I fall / As I grieve

The blinding fear is consuming

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My anxiety-infected veins pour
I'm beyond weak

I don't want to be afraid anymore
Let me bleed

This is the only way out
A perfect exit for a coward

No longer am I bound
I couldn't survive my darkest hour
The hands of time weave
The cruelty that I cannot see
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"Living My Life / Behind Hollowed Eyes"
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BlackRose-98 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013   Traditional Artist
I love this. It's such a perfect poem, gives a perfect emotion and everything. You did a really good job. :)
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for this comment. I really needed it today! :D
I'm so glad you found this to your liking.
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is very good; I loved it! So dark and deep, and I loved the rhythm.
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much.
It's the third revision, so I'm glad the work paid off. :D
Comments such as these reassure me to keep on doing what I'm doing!
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Lilithmae1231 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. And definitely keep on going! :D
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MistrzFilut Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
sad
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Happypanda is now Sadpanda :(
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messie2624 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Lucille0765 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that's very deep. But wonderful. Great job.
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