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Heartsbane

Being around you like I am
It's a sensation I can hardly stand
Passed the point of torture, which I can barely pretend
So I have you show you I'm okay, and that I'm doing the best I can

This weight of my heart's world
Harboring all of these scars, new and old
And it contains countless secrets that I try and hold
Which I continue to endure alone, because I sold my soul
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This pain is my peace
That's why I need you, please

Your hope divides the fear
So I will always depend on you being here

But I'm so afraid
To let myself love someone again

Because my hands are still stained
From all of those heavy tears that rained

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I want to forbid myself from becoming lost in your eyes
While I'm desperately trying to not release everything that's bottled up inside
Every second, I'm an inch away from revealing all of these feelings that I try to hide
I'd give you it all, and deny you nothing, for I know your happiness will also become mine

I don't want another day to be loveless
Because every time I see you I'm left breathless
And this undeniable passion I have for you is of the deepest
I yearn to finally say "I love you." because I fell for you the hardest
Now my cries are faint
While my heart is trapped inside of love again

I will no longer suffer a fool's fate
Because I'm going to confess to you on this day
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Stock image = [link]

This poem is written for my project titled "Broken Wings Unbound: I'm Falling Down, I'm Soaring Now"
In volume four: Lost Love

Check out my other "Heart poems" in the links below
"Healing My Heart" - [link]
"Only In My Memories" - [link]
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EvilxPanda78 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I dont know why but your literature puts me in a gothic devious almost comfortable mood
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wonder if that's kind of common....with other people O.O

*thumbs up* This is my favorite comment of 2012! <3
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EvilxPanda78 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY thank you :D
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aylee95 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
so beauiful D: and I can relate kind of.. :) It's nice to read your things again.
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) I'll try to release more content. And thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. <3
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aylee95 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
yay~! :D
you're welcome! :D Hope to see you soon again.
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^ What they said :']
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww lol, Well thank you. :)
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Safe-As-Houses Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My sentiments exactly. This poem is lovely; it rhymes in the right places, and describes something many of us can relate to. I love it. :')
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ I did the best I could on this one, which is why I really love this kind of feedback. Thank you so, so much! <3 I'm relieved people like it.
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