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Fallen Into Darkness
I'm a dark void, my shadow casts its own shadow
And I'm too much of a coward to even try and turn back
I'm so bleak, because I've managed to create a new breed of sorrow
And I'd be a fool to even attempt to move out and into the blinding black
My mere gaze can darken the brightest tomorrow
That must be why I am destined to remain here forever
My life is unaware that death is what I yearn to give into
That's another reason to sever every bond for the better
I vowed to myself that I wouldn't take you down with me
Your kind strength and light is what I can no longer borrow
I am nothing but a doubled-edged sword, it is what I will always be
I'm regretfully swaying away from the promised path that I used to follow
But I assure you that I will be alright
So please remember you did everything you could
But I've already made up my mind
And you said every hopeful word you should
Now you need to let me go, and continue on with your burdenless life
You really didn't want to give up on me, but I always knew you would
Now you will no longer worry, because from now on everything will be fine
You tried your very best to help me, but your hope is what I have never understood
You need forget about me as best as you can
Because this battle is lost
It's that time now where your hand can no longer be lent
Because I am a dying cause
Good bye, my dear friend
I'm so sorry to see us go, but sometimes life can be heartless
Hello, the bitter end
Alas, I have finally fallen into darkness
I'm a dark void, my shadow casts its own shadow
And I'm too much of a coward to even try and turn back
I'm so bleak, because I've managed to create a new breed of sorrow
And I'd be a fool to even attempt to move out and into the blinding black
My mere gaze can darken the brightest tomorrow
That must be why I am destined to remain here forever
My life is unaware that death is what I yearn to give into
That's another reason to sever every bond for the better
I vowed to myself that I wouldn't take you down with me
Your kind strength and light is what I can no longer borrow
I am nothing but a doubled-edged sword, it is what I will always be
I'm regretfully swaying away from the promised path that I used to follow
But I assure you that I will be alright
So please remember you did everything you could
But I've already made up my mind
And you said every hopeful word you should
Now you need to let me go, and continue on with your burdenless life
You really didn't want to give up on me, but I always knew you would
Now you will no longer worry, because from now on everything will be fine
You tried your very best to help me, but your hope is what I have never understood
You need forget about me as best as you can
Because this battle is lost
It's that time now where your hand can no longer be lent
Because I am a dying cause
Good bye, my dear friend
I'm so sorry to see us go, but sometimes life can be heartless
Hello, the bitter end
Alas, I have finally fallen into darkness
Literature
Remember the Angel?
Remember the angel that wiped your tears and made you brightly smile?
You always told her to let you be; you were always in denial.
Remember the angel that sang you to sleep and played with your hair?
You never cared to have her near you, though that smile was still there
Remember the angel that waited for you, the one who waited countless hours?
You never seemed to even notice, I guess that was your power
Remember the angel that saved your life, risking also her own?
You ran away and left her there, you left her there alone
Remember the angel that fell from heaven, only to be with you?
You marked her with your sin and made her feel
Literature
The Tears Are Dried
The tears are dried, but I still cry
There is something in me that won't stop
My sadness has ended, but I'm not happy
There is something in me that won't let me
I'm trapped in the past, and recovery is 50 miles away
I have tried walking but I do not get any closer
The blessings I have had, they are counted
Now I will find all my curses
I think I deserve this, am I wrong?
Can even the one up above forgive me?
Moving on, oh I wish I could
But my heart is stuck and I can't help it
The tears have dried, but I still cry
There is something in me that won't stop
Literature
Wings Of Darkness
Wings Of Darkness
My warrior:
Bind me within your embrace
My defender:
Bestow me with your grace
I seek your help to obtain the unseen
I need you to blind me from the light
Never let me see my weakness again
Blanket my fears so I won't cry
Cease the false hope from shining in vain
Ward away the lies that hide behind my eyes
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Morph this disaster into a calm night
Burn the dying sun out
Darken the nightmarish sky
Let the ominous clouds melt
Lock away this cursed gift of sight
I no longer desire it
Shut out the world from you and I
I yearn for the abyss
Rip away my self-hatred
Bring back my innocence
Obliterate the life I created
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You let go of me, but I don't resent you
Because you did everything you had to
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This poem was written for my project which is titled-
"Broken Wings Unbound: I'm Falling Down, I'm Soaring Now"
In volume two: Dark Depths
Fallen Into Darkness-
A Spark In The Dark -
Becoming The Darkness -
Our Walk In The Dark - Not Yet Written
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Because you did everything you had to
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This poem was written for my project which is titled-
"Broken Wings Unbound: I'm Falling Down, I'm Soaring Now"
In volume two: Dark Depths
Fallen Into Darkness-
A Spark In The Dark -
Becoming The Darkness -
Our Walk In The Dark - Not Yet Written
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Check out my galleries below if you want to read more.
Watch me if you think that you might like my work.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI'm not really good at writing critiques so...here it is!
All I can say is...wow! Because this poem that you wrote was very deep and it felt like it just touched your soul and the fact that everyone in some point of their lives they might feel this way, like they're lost in the darkness or somehow fallen into the darkness and they try their best to look for the light such as hope and faith and the picture pretty much sums it up of what losing hope looks like this poem is very powerful and you perfectly grasp the feeling of sinking into the darkness