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A World Of Gray

The dull sun glares upon our society
On this meaningless morning of today

Reflecting each others hypocrisy
Transfixed on each others gaze

Think-headed and relaxed
Nonchalant and vexed

Practicing the art of being ungrateful
Portraying the act of an imbecile
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Some say that it's just life's cycle
As they lie through convincing smiles

Feeding false information
Teaching faults from past generations

There's all different kinds of people
Who carry around different kinds of evil


My skin turns to stone! / My blood turns to ash!
My heart I disowned! / My sins drown in a mass!

My organs turn to dust! / My sight becomes colorless!
My thoughts start to rust! / My cruelty becomes careless!


I don't know where we went wrong
The future's history can't be undone

Though it can be prevented
Spare the guilt of countless resentments

We have to decide on the decent choice
And watch the noise that comes form our voice
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The dim moon smiles upon our possibilities
On this potential ominous night

Morally judging from our lack of diversity
I hope the chances for change are right

Because this has turned into a world
That I don't want to live in anymore

I don't want to endure another typical day
For I have become so sick of the sight of gray
As the world fades away
All I can see is this disgusting color of gray
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Evalnia Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very beautifully written.
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :D
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Evalnia Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, great work :D
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LittelLionBigRoar Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hey this reminds of what i wrote a few days ago. its more about a specific person than the entire world though. read it if you'll like[link]
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh well that's kind of cool. I had to change my title. This is a revision, the first version was called "A Shade Of Gray" And it was titled that years before that stupid 50 shades of gray became a meme. So when I found out what that book was about, I was like "Shit....I need to change the title now....or else I'll look like a fool x.x"

It follows the same concept and it has some of the same stanzas in it, it just has a new title mostly.
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LittelLionBigRoar Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
alright. good to know!
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MedusaArt Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Student General Artist
This is beautifully written. It says a lot about the world. :)
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading this one. :)
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MedusaArt Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student General Artist
No probs! :D
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camilah Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
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