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A Loveless Day
(That Will Never Fade)

This same old dream that I so loath
A vision of a dull world shrouded in gray

As I walk down a never ending road
The colorlessness in everything never seems to decay

In slow motion I suffer alone
Under the  liquid-silver droplets of rain

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You had no idea how strong my love was
You played a part in the pain that was dealt and done

You didn't experience the ocean of tears that I had to swim through
You didn't see the countless days I had to endure without being around you

You never felt the sickness within the soul that I had kept
You never knew of the quakes in my heart that you had fed

For you I had damaged myself
For you I put myself through hell

But I swear it was worth it
Because now I know how hard life can get

I want you to realize that you aren't a loss
For you will always be known as my first love

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This same old reality that I can't let go
A nightmare of a person who is so far away

As I try to run from the world that I don't want to know
I'm still locked within my own unbearable heartache

Even though you left a long time ago
I'm still living in a loveless day that will never fade


"I woke up today already knowing that I've seen better days."
Ten years later, I couldn't wait anymore.
Ten failed confessions later, I finally let it all go.
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wolfchild1214 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student
this poem is amazing, im in love with ur poems ^V^
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh
Well I'm happy you enjoyed this particular one. It's an old favorite. You actually might be happy to know that I have written a sequel to this one. It's called "A Sleepless Night" and you can read it here ---> fav.me/d5b463l

As you will see, they are very similar and follow the same style and behind the scenes aspects of the words behind the words.
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wolfchild1214 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student
oh wow this looks awesome too :D (Big Grin) 
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erco71 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i felt every line..amazing imagery :+favlove:
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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erco71 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
inspiring is the word i would use for you..i await your next poem:)
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ExaltedPoet Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:typerhappy:
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COLOREDINLOVE Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They are..and that will never change..I carry mine in my heart
still! Even though it was short and I did marry..the love of another is a joyous thing and when it ends..you think that there will never be another..I still dream about him..yes..sweet sorrow!
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh yes. I really wished that first loves weren't the same for everyone....But I guess it's hard to break that powerful cycle. It seems like a life-lesson we all seem to go through at some point in our lives. </3 and <3
Thank you for your insight. :)
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COLOREDINLOVE Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are welcome hon!!
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Ciditious-Cidemius Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
It makes me sad, but somehow it's comforting as well...
it's hard to let go
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have to agree with you on that. It's hard to let go, but in some cases it's for the greater good. Thank you for your kind comment. <3 :D
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Ciditious-Cidemius Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
you are very welcome <3
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l0ro Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's amazing... thank you so much for sharing. Heh... this seems so real to me right now. ^^"
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, well, I know it's darkest before the dawn. And this is a pretty touchy subject. I sure hope you manage to get through whatever you are going through at the moment.
Thank you for taking the time to read this piece. <3 It means a lot.
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TinnaAres Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it. It's so imaginative I just..love it xD
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, well thank you a ton. I'm glad you loved it. I did...my best with this. :)
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TinnaAres Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome (:
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Shyanne-Kai Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
Perfect, and so true it hurts :(
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thank you, that means a lot. :')
I'm glad you liked it.
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reflectionsinwater Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The images are great and the flow is great. :) But the pain is eternal. ;(
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I agree with everything you've said. <3 and </3

Thank you so much.
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King-Doodles Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I didnt even read the entire thing (sorry) and i like it sooo much. It tells...so much.
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SurvivingNights Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, well I'm glad you read some of it then. Thank you for your kind words. <3
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King-Doodles Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome.
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